The following flash fiction is for the 7 Virtues Blog Challenge hosted by the lovely Lady Antimony at: http://ladyantimony.blogspot.com/2011/07/repentance.html (sign up is toward the bottom of that page). Once again, as with the 7 Deadly Sins blog challenge, my entries are based in the world of my novel BLOOD THIEF, but are not canon for it. Enjoy and please be kind and leave feedback :D
(Updated 8/8/11 - I've posted the remaining virtues today rather than doing them daily this week as I'm not sure if I'll be in everyday or not this week)
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Chastity
The mirror showed a strong jaw with just a trace of beard,
dark hair, and hazel eyes that were more green than brown. He relied on his looks when seeking female
prey. He smiled, sensuous lips parting
to reveal straight white teeth and sharp fangs.
Women were a joy to drink, sweeter tasting than their counterparts. Often they were willing, offering blood and
body. Memories of his long-dead love
kept him from accepting the latter. He
would break the skin of their soft supple throats, but his fangs were the only
part of him to gain penetration during the feast.
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Temperance (self-control)
He was sprawled in my bed, sleeping soundly. One arm rested above his head, the other
dangled over the mattress’s edge. His
pulse visibly throbbed in his bare wrist and I caught myself licking my
teeth. It would be easy to exploit his
vulnerable state, easy to drink from that unwittingly proffered arm. He would wake as I drank, of course, but it
would be to the flood of pleasurable sensation only a vampire’s bite can give.
I shook my head, I promised I wouldn’t.
Marshalling all my will-power I slipped out of the room, closing the
door behind me.
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Charity
Faint weeping could be heard over the patter of rain. With the rain cloaking my approach from my
prey, I found the sound’s source up under the supports of the bridge crossing
Jackson Street. A woman clutched a
sobbing child to her side. Both were
shabbily dressed and shivering. A rattling cough shook the woman’s thin
frame. As I approached, the woman
quickly pushed the child behind her. Wordlessly, I reached in my pocket and
handed her a couple of hundreds.
Gratitude shone in the woman’s eyes.
I turned and walked away. I would
find sanguine sustenance elsewhere this night.
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Diligence
My shoulder throbbed where it had been ripped open by the
revenant’s teeth, but I switched the knife to my left hand and headed further
into the caverns. I needed no torch, my
pupils had fully dilated at the first hint of danger, one of the many
advantages of being a vampire. I had
sent four of the damned creatures to their second death already, including the
one that bit me. I would make certain none remained. Revenants were an anathema, the result of
vampirism gone wrong, failed turnings.
It was my duty to eliminate them.
Every last one.
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Patience
I wanted him, craved him.
Absolutely nothing was going to keep me from having him. I wanted to enjoy every inch, every
ounce. His scent, the warmth of him, and
the thudding cadence of his heart bid me to come closer, to have just a
taste.
I watched as he kissed her goodnight and as she went
in. He stared after her a bit then
stepped blithely down the stairs, unaware of me watching him from the shadows. I would wait.
The whimsical relationships of youth did not last long among
humans. When this was over, he would be
mine.
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Kindness
He placed the envelope on the table as if daring me to look
inside. I didn’t. I knew what the medical reports held. I could smell the cancer in him, hear disease
in his lungs, see the light fleeing his rheumy eyes. Vampires have long been called the walking
dead, but this elderly man deserved the designation more than I.
“It would be a kindness,” he wheezed.
“A mercy killing?”
He nodded, baring his throat.
Gently holding him, I pressed my fangs through his fragile
skin, drinking deeply. He sighed with
pleasure, sagging into my arms and slipping into oblivion.
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Humility
Flakes of old leather broke away from the cover as my
fingertips touched the book. Gently
opening the slim volume, I found the print still legible. The words it held were my guidance once. I
read the prayer aloud, sinking to my knees as I beseeched my creator’s
forgiveness for the grievous sins I’d committed. Granted a measure of immortality, pride was
surely the chief sin of the vampire. The
curse of the vampire however is two-fold: out-living those you cherish and the terrible
memories one never out-lives. Blood tears coursed down my cheeks as I humbled
myself before God.
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11 comments:
"Women were a joy to drink..."
Whoa. What beautiful characterization in just six words.
Okay, SOLD. ME WANT MORE.
I like it. Virtuous undead are an interesting character type to examine--though I can appreciate why you might not want it being canon for your setting.
Your vampires have reflections?
Eitherway, I'm totally into the blood-drinker that doesn't indulge other appetites.
I'm thinking that the poor ladies get the worst of both worlds here! Are you planning on linking your texts? I want to read more!
Interesting take on the virtue, a chaste vampire. Even death departing them and he's still loyal. Nice mix of good and evil.
Well as long as your vampire isn't Angel that is all chaste to prevent his soul from disappearing, then I am all good with it. Great job. I like that being chaste doesnt mean being that he spares them from their fate... he'll still drink em.
Thank you for the kind comments :)
@David - Yes, my vamps have reflections. Having a history in biology, I created vampires that can be explained scientifically (at least for the most part!)
@glitterword - Nope, his name is Nick and hopefully you'll be hearing a lot more about him in the future.
I love these pieces. They're so different compared to the others.
These are all deliciously wonderful! I would love to read your other work!
Ah, scientifically explainable vampires. Very cool. I've got my own dark fantasy setting where vampires used to have reflections, and even before that used to be a living race--so I'd be very curious to know what your explanation was for their origin.
Eitherway really clever to have a host of Virtuous vampires. I like it.
What a joy these are to read Rebecca! Really enjoying seeing you twist and turn the genre to reflect the different facets of virtuousness - or lack thereof. I love how well rounded they read in the whole, but also how each story stands alone really strongly. Job well done!
These are gorgeous. Very sensual, and easy to understand despite their length.
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